My, what a busy thread! And one I’m glad to see attracting so many posts.
As those of you who are older may know, I spent the first half of my quizbowl career vigorously lobbying for the inclusion of “score clues” (broadly defined) and for the reform of how we wrote them, to make them describe less obscure features and describe them more precisely. Things have come a very long way since I wrote my music-question-writing guide in 2014. The sample howlers I included from that year’s Nats are of a kind that one virtually never sees in tournaments of recent years. So, whatever misgivings I may have about current practices are easily outweighed by my happiness at how generally healthy score-clue-writing is, these days.
With that said, I have to agree with what Matt Jackson said in his first post:
Adventure Temple Trail wrote: ↑Mon Nov 07, 2022 11:54 pm
In recent years, it seems as though the term "score clue" has undergone semantic narrowing to the point that it almost always means "transcribed string of notes", and that kind of clue ("in this piece, the trumpet melody goes D-E-F-F-etc.") has also become significantly more common. I have sometimes been helped by these clues, and I believe there should be some sometimes. But I find it unfortunate that the "note spelling" subtype of score clue seems to be crowding out other kinds of clue in auditory fine arts questions.
I quote his actual words, because it’s interesting to see that the first lengthy response in this thread (Chris Sims’s) ends with a defense of score clues writ large. This helps to prove Matt Jackson’s point. Only in an environment in which the term “score clue” has undergone precisely the sort of “semantic narrowing” he is talking about could one think that a call for fewer “note-spelling” clues is some kind of attack on the institution of score clues in general! (We see this also in Wonyoung and Alex’s replies, which also address score clues in general, as if this were the same subject.)
It seems to me that there are at least three strands of discourse running through this thread:
- Empirical claims about whether note-spelling clues are more buzzable or less buzzable than other types of music clues
- Value claims about whether the skills and knowledge involved in buzzing on note-spelling clues are the kinds quizbowl should focus on rewarding
- Practical suggestions on how to modify existing note-spelling clue practices in service of one of the above two domains—that is, either to make them more buzzable or to make them more rewarding of some approved form of knowledge
The empirical claims are basically all anecdotal. (“I can / I can’t / most people can / most people can’t buzz on note-spelling clues!”) In response to them, I’d like to see some data from tournaments that kept buzzpoint data. Are note-spelling clues generally more buzzable or less buzzable than non-note-spelling clues in the same positions in tossups? Are longer note-spelling clues more helpful or less helpful than shorter note-spelling clues? It might be that the sample of note-spelling buzzes we can find are too small to be used as good data. But if so, that would prove the point of those who think that note-spelling clues are not super buzzable.
Some of the value claims have centered on Sarah’s analogy between note-spelling and math computation. It’s strange to me that people have taken this bait. It doesn’t matter if the fundamental skills might be similar in some way; the latter is the exercise of a skill for exercise’s sake, whereas the former is the exercise of a skill in order to process a description of the core features of an artwork. Whatever “calculating” might be happening is a means of recognizing and engaging with the aesthetic content of the musical work being clued. This difference alone makes the analogy completely incapable of proving anything about the value / lack of value of note-spelling clues.
When Sarah says something like “score clues actually demand a relatively surface-level engagement with subject matter - akin to those annoying clues that just ask for minute, impossible-to-place details of a specific painting,” it should be even more obvious that we’re not dealing with the reality of how music questions are currently written. Most note-spelling clues in the past five or so years are about literally the most immediately recognizable melodies in a piece; they thus bear no resemblance whatsoever to “minute, impossible-to-place details” in a painting. If they have any correlates in visual art, those would be the central figures of a painting, not background details. Likewise, when Devin criticizes note-spelling clues because they test “ability to exercise skill in condensed timeframe, not depth of knowledge,” he’s making a similar error. These kinds of clues are not inherently about something surface or deep. Note-spelling is a mode of description. The thing being described can be ultra famous or maddeningly obscure.
Continuing on the subject of value, it’s worth noting that Matt Jackson never argued that note-spelling clues aren’t about important parts of pieces. He argued that they are crowding out the other forms of musical knowledge worth rewarding, some of which were enumerated by Ophir in the list that Matt provided. It’s sad to me that there hasn’t been more acknowledgment of the necessity of pursuing those other subjects.
However, it is the practical matters that interest me most. Here's what I regard as the important point: Not all themes translate equally well into score clues, and not all themes that might translate equally well into score clues translate equally well into
pitch-based score clues. One could say more generally: themes that would be equally buzzable if played/heard in a music-listening tournament will not necessarily be equally buzzable when described as some sort of score clue, even if the score clue is ideally formulated.
This is crucial because it is where the analogy between something like literature-writing and music-writing breaks down. For example, for most medium-length poems, if I choose the right lines and quote them in the right order, I can automatically produce a playable tossup. I cannot do this for a piece of music. I cannot take theme after theme—even exclusively the most famous themes from a piece—spell them as pitches, and produce a series of viable clues. Each theme is partly constituted of several non-pitch elements, including rhythm, instrumentation, dynamics, tempo, etc. For some of these themes, the inclusion of the right combination of these elements is necessary for a clue to work.
Thus, while I’m alarmed by the over-preponderance of “note-spelling” clues (or of clues that use non-pitch information primarily for context, not as a fundamental part of the clue), this is not primarily an ideological objection. It seems pretty clear to me that the reason these clues have become so popular is that writers are not giving enough thought to selecting the right elements to effectively describe any given musical moment. (Rattling off a bunch of pitches is possibly the most brainless way to write a music tossup.) I am not convinced that melodies should be the default form of score clue (although I regard that view as defensible); but even if they are, bald “note-spelling” should be a small piece of what this involves, not the entirety or near-entirety.
For example, I found what I believe to be the Scheherazade tossup that Chris was referring to. Here it is:
The theme of this work’s second movement first appears in a grace-note-littered bassoon solo of a descending sequence of rapid major seconds beginning F-sharp, E, F-sharp, accompanied only by muted double basses. The opening of this work’s third movement features 26- and 32- note tuplets in the clarinet and flute, and a snare drum accompanies a more staccato variation of its main theme in a triple-p clarinet solo beginning C, D, long E, D-sharp, E. The descending whole (*) tone scale E, D, C, B-flat is emphasised in a fortissimo pesante [pe-zan-tay] theme which contrasts, and eventually reconciles, with a recurring violin recitative of semiquaver triplets representing this work’s title figure. With movements like “The Kalendar Prince” and “The Sea and Sinbad's Ship”, for 10 points, name this Rimsky-Korsakov suite named for the narrator of A Thousand and One Nights.
ANSWER: Scheherazade [or Shekherazáda]
It’s striking to me that the first two clues are much better than the next two. Even though the description “descending sequence of rapid major seconds” is inaccurate for multiple reasons, the combination of grace notes and bassoon accompanied only by only muted double basses (a good instrumentation clue, because this is such an unusual combination) would allow me to go in on “F-sharp, E, F-sharp.” For the second clue, 26- and 32- note tuplets in the clarinet and flute are more distinctive than virtually any pitch string could be. (Although, saying each of these tuplets forms a rising and falling arc would seal the deal for me.)
However, at least for me, the third clue is hampered by the fact that it relies too heavily on the pitch (and has accidentally provided the notated pitch in the B-flat clarinet part, rather than concert pitch). Chris has suggested lengthening the string of pitches. But I’d say that this is the perfect example of a clue that needed a rhythm rather than more notes. The most notable thing about this movement is the rhythm of the two themes (indeed that’s what most strongly links them, to begin with). Even if you gave me
only “In 6/8, two pickup eighths, then dotted-eighth, sixteenth, two tied eighths” that would be significantly more buzzable than this string of pitches, and that rhythm plus some combination of clarinet, snare drum, and dynamics (the other information given in the actual tossup) is more than sufficient. (The reason the fourth clue is not ideal is that it provides the notes of Sharyar’s theme in scale order, rather than in the order that they appear in the actual theme.)
Natan has referred to this problem of missing rhythm as well. I would suggest that writers apply the following test at minimum: If you’re going to give a string of pitches without rhythm, force yourself to hum aloud (or play) the string of pitches at an even rhythm, with the metric stress on the first one. How recognizable is this melody to you? If you have any doubts about this, add other elements! Even better, don’t make starting from pitch alone your default! Consider writing out, for yourself, all of the most helpful elements and subtract until the clue is short enough.
People have also raised the problem of recognizing whether an interval is supposed to be ascending or descending. I failed to buzz once on one of my favorite motives in classical music, because I was mentally seeing/hearing it in the wrong direction! I thought JORDU had the most brilliant solution to this: it declared at the tournament’s outset that all note-strings assume movement to the nearest note of the same letter, unless stated otherwise. Thus, C-E would be ascending by default, while C-G would be descending by default. I considered doing this for ACF Nationals 2022, but ultimately did not, because I wasn’t sure if it was within ACF rules to make this sort of announcement in Round One of a national tournament. I think this is something that tournaments should strongly consider doing in future. If they don’t, it is absolutely incumbent on the question to specify the direction in cases where a mistake is likely and impactful.
Additional thoughts from me later, perhaps.